Two Hands & A Snack.

Posts : 21 Joined : 2010-02-22

http://www.truploader.com/view/226463
This, right here, is what boredom does to me.
Please feel free to C&C. Tell me whats wrong, don't be gentle. kthx.

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looks good ...nasty but good only thing i see is the ines are super rugged on the hand what i do is just hilight right click and smooth it a few times also the hands seem to flat ad more detentions

Staff Posts : 1243 Joined : 2010-02-16

I like the idea, but there are a few things that bug me..
1) you create very sloppy outlining, it's better to clean it up, especially if it just a drawing, not an animation.
2) the positioning of the fingers is very boring.. by changing how the fingers are facing, you create a sense of life.
3) you got lazy and just copied the first hand, flipped it horizontally and pasted it to the other side.

Staff Posts : 1299 Joined : 2010-02-17

Tom's number two makes sense... fingers must be forced into that position by way of muscular effort; that is not their relaxed postion. I know that the relaxed position will be much harder to draw.

I didn't notice number three upon my first viewing. Copying and pasting is not a good idea when it comes to life, as opposed to machinery. Living beings are naturally asymmetrical when it comes to positioning... perhaps I worded that incorrectly.

Posts : 21 Joined : 2010-02-22

Lol. I'm not the best artist, matter a fact the hands came to be a surprise to me. But, yeah I understand which you guys are saying

I made that in like 5 minutes... and, I prefer that sketchy outlines for some reason, it's just my taste I guess.

Staff Posts : 1299 Joined : 2010-02-17

BandAid wrote:: I prefer that sketchy outlines for some reason, it's just my taste I guess.

Make sure you vote in all of my RHGs. Lol.

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BandAid wrote:: I prefer that sketchy outlines for some reason, it's just my taste I guess.

Lol true

Posts : 2822 Joined : 2010-02-16

BandAid wrote:: Lol. I'm not the best artist, matter a fact the hands came to be a surprise to me. But, yeah I understand which you guys are saying I made that in like 5 minutes... and, I prefer that sketchy outlines for some reason, it's just my taste I guess.

Then use thinner lines. You should use 40% smoothing in flash imo.

I agree on unrelaxed hand. Also you haven't tried to shade it. You won't learn nothin' if you never shade!
And wtf is the red thing?

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