TEST Swoosh, step, Swoosh!

Have been laying out the general motion and idea for an animation part im working on.. will change effects after further investigation on how to do an epic effect, to turn the swoosh into a BANG!

http://www.truploader.com/view/287266

Comment or DIE! :x

Like a ninja's weightless dash upon the water's surface, Wilty streams toward his destiny.

...kinda over-describing it in one sentence, though the running could be a bit faster if his legs are going to be that outstretched.

Just take out a few frames or redesign the step?

I would say re-design the step, but that's adding too much of my own personal preference to your style. The run just looks kinda slow... yeah, maybe removing some frames would be enough. Test around, sir...phuck around with the animation.

Took some doubled frames out, result =

http://www.truploader.com/view/824390

Yeah that is now perfect the beginning one was to slow as hitorio said but i love the way it speeds up in the middle thats great keep up the good work :3

nice.

but it feels so... plain. There's no cinematic feel to it.
You need more active angles that don't just show one plain movement. It also feels like he's barely moving. Like the camera conveniently follows him in that exact way.

Spice it up a bit. Everyone loves good animation but they don't usually care if the animation itself is not intense or entertaining.

I love the effect but i think the animation needs to speed up but i like it alot