anime clean up practise

i continued on making "flying man punches " and decided to clean up some parts and see how it would turn out like.
it aint really smooth though ,because it's not finished lol

http://www.truploader.com/view/221870

Fux yeah; your roughs seems to be less stiff. That shot in which the flying man picks up a sign...ossum schitt. You even reminded me to mix it up with my camera angles a bit.

I am definitely liking the clean version of your chars, though they aren't consistent with the outline, resulting in that stiff look.

I smell good things from the clash at the end and the flying shot before.

G-war, I'm very surprised.

You're impressing me more and more!
Keep up those cleans, you're really neat with your lines. That's valuable.

Are you keeping up the 'keying' method? Master it. Your characters are drawn really nicely, and you can over-kill it with shading and smoother movement.

Great job dude!

that is OWSUM!!! thats amazing i hope you finish that, i am lost for words at that complete and utter epicness of this animation so far keep at it :3

thanks guys,^^
the lines are drawn with the smallest brush size at 400 % zoom so the lines look very thin,like in anime.
so i'm forced to zoom in at all times, bigger frames are harder to draw this way though ,which result into frames looking way different from each other and i guess a choppy animation.

I never thought you'd use a paintbrush. I assumed that you wielded a pencil for the clean-up job. *rubs chin*

A time lapse of your progress would be cool.
I tried to create one, but I haven't found any decent camera recording programs for the Mac.

sure i could do a timelapse, i'll post it here when i'm done !
btw you should try camtasia

here is a timelapse of one frame lol

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tRdJqlwwcFM

Nice.! I may do the same. I actually tried to get one up before, but turns out the recording program crashed on me.

The track - Thumbs up.
Who's it by? (If I guess right...)

yeah i would like to see you animate man ! , it crashed twice with me as well but it had auto save luckily ..

the song is "new beginnings " by future world music (the guitar part is cut out though).
i love this kind of music !

Ah. Future World Music. Yes, I am definitely familiar with the group. Fucking awesome. I'm liking you more and more.

Future World Music
Audiomachine
Brand X Music
Corner Stone Cues
E.S. Posthumus
Epic Score
Globus
GRV
Immediate Music
Nemesis Music
Posthaste Music
Siren Cues
Two Steps From Hell
X-Ray Dog

...and those are only the groups of mine.
...I guess I'm going overboard. I'll get to that screen-recording session.

awesome , i already knew a few of them but i'm gonna check out the rest !