PLasmaghost Art Log- Super Tau

Super Tau- a comic book that I intend on starting

http://www.fileize.com/view/4b140582-95a/

http://www.fileize.com/view/247d0214-25b/

http://www.fileize.com/view/f1cbbdb3-c29/ - I like this one, my first time doing a comic book-y thing like this.

http://plasmaghost01.deviantart.com/art/Coulumbnimbus-Sketch-319805284?q=gallery%3Aplasmaghost01%2F38750745&qo=4

http://plasmaghost01.deviantart.com/art/Coulumbnimbus-319806025?q=gallery%3Aplasmaghost01%2F38750745&qo=3

http://plasmaghost01.deviantart.com/art/Super-Tau-Info-Basic-320816282?q=gallery%3Aplasmaghost01%2F38750745&qo=2

http://plasmaghost01.deviantart.com/art/Elektron-Info-Basic-321076412?q=gallery%3Aplasmaghost01%2F38750745&qo=1 - his design has changed so much its rediculous hahah

http://plasmaghost01.deviantart.com/art/Gravitron-Sketch-322400452?q=gallery%3Aplasmaghost01%2F38750745&qo=0 - when I post the finished version of him that i have you wont even recognize him lol.

Your stuff is just so amazing like ERRR! I wanna fuck you jk, but seriously.

I have chirped you on that style you use for Tau's head but you got some nice artwork there mate.
Clean cartoony logo (though a bit cliche)
nice illustration here
http://www.fileize.com/view/247d0214-25b/
it makes a great cover art. I genuinely like it. Although the lighting of the beam on the monster's body doesn't really feel like light, cause you just took the beam's color and put it on that guy's blue suit. In reality the blue suit should have had a duller and bluer reflection. Ironically if you do it the way I described, the light will seem more vibrant. It's not about how 'bright' you make all the colors in order to get the feeling of a bright light, it's about how accurate you make all the colors.

Anyway, point is:
If you make the reflection on his fabric is that glossy and pure, then his suit should have a very reflective texture, meaning it should reflect other things as well. Almost like a blue chrome suit.Again, I really like that one, I was staring at it for a while.

And I like this too.
http://www.fileize.com/view/f1cbbdb3-c29/

Great job man, keep it up!

You are intending to make a comic book outta this.
....HMMMMMM!!!!! Depending on how you portray this comic of yours, it could be amazing... or not. I could imagine a series like yours growing into a storm of relative awesomeness, but I can also imagine mediocrity happening instead. Depends on how competently you can write comics and can understand what makes for a good read. It would be interesting to see you take off on this.
We should talk more about making series. Perhaps on iRC.

@ Tocksique Thanks man! I'm glad you like them (though most are just quick roughs)

@ Edyrem, Im stunned on how I didn't do that to be honest. it seems so clear now as to why it looked off to me. thanks for the tip!

@Hitorio I hope it comes out amazing and not mediocre, I'm trying to get every important detail in order before I start doing an actual "Comic" to show. I'll be waiting~ @3@ hyeh hyeh hyeh hyeh

can we get a short synopsis of your story ?

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@ Edyrem, Im stunned on how I didn't do that to be honest.

You don't have to feel this way. We all have a lot of room for improvement. It's okay to consider yourself on the beginner side. (Saying this for all of us really)

@ehl, not atm. I want to be at least 90% sure of how I want things to play out (tbh there's only like 3 or 4 things I'm still thinking about editing or re working) Also, I want the story to be a bit mysterious, there are certain characters that are major plot points that I'm hoping will sneak up on people~

mystery's awesome. I love clues

Is that yellow guy inspired by black atom? Otherwise, nice stuff man you could work for DC (Judging by your style and all).