Naruto vs Sasuke restarted

http://www.truploader.com/view/362470

i restarted it yesterday agin but i think ill get it right this time

Thanks Hitorio for all the help

EDIT:
http://www.truploader.com/view/925234

nice nice i like the effect on how the frog flew down and i like the facial expression :3 keep up the good work

Keep it up, mane!!
I do hope that we can see some action sometime soon. You inspired?

Im animating the fighnt scenes now :3 I cant seem to get narutos run cycle right though its either to choppy or too smooth

I like it, good effort on the detail

But you look like you're trying to do the clean version from scratch, which will make your characters stiffer, drawings, shittier, and last but not least, will make your actual animation suffer.

For example, sasuke's hair wasn't very sasuke-hair, but more like emo down hair. you were probably too caught up in hastiness to do it right since, i mean, you skipped right to the clean version.

And the frog didn't make sense with when he was coming down then fucked reality and logic in the ass when he suddenly appeared in a correct angle.


^MORAL OF THE STORY: DO ROUGH VERSHUN.

Seriously though, you're a good animator. But good animators are good because they go the extra mile in quality. Do it.