I just started flash D: HELP?!

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/s127201077_Snowboard_yay.html

I didn't do that "green stick" for movements, since this is like skeleton for to draw top of :/ I have done little flahs before, but now I'm trying shit out again.

Mctoast wrote:

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/s127201077_Snowboard_yay.html

I didn't do that "green stick" for movements, since this is like skeleton for to draw top of :/ I have done little flahs before, but now I'm trying shit out again.

HEY DJ MASTER MCTOAST!
its me jettzin from wtfteam
also i'd suggest going to http://www.posemaniacs.com/ (like everyone else suggests for help on this site ) if you want a realistc style of drawing
if not and you want cartoonish style than um you practice more?
and key frame
idk im out of ideas im a noob myself

Pretty damn cool, I love the background most, cant wait till you color it but im afraid it will look like another newgrounds animation when you add color ,also the lines are a bit inconstant some places but i like the style post the finished version

Lol is he tripping balls or something? Staring at his hands?

Anyway, those backgrounds are really nice, but there is a lot of wobbliness and inconsistency in the character. Only way you can improve that is to practice a lot. Also, getting a tablet helps lol.

Also, the hand he's looking at changes (close up is left hand, zoomed out is right hand)

Okey thx all. First off, What do you mean with newgrounds animations? Just shaky and coloured? I want to have realistic style for movements, but mine is more sketching types I guess

If you just started i think that's pretty great. The main problem is the shakiness. Keep up the good work man.

Mctoast wrote:

Okey thx all. First off, What do you mean with newgrounds animations? Just shaky and coloured? I want to have realistic style for movements, but mine is more sketching types I guess

idk newgrounds animations, when i think of them I get a picture in my mind or brush tool at 50% smoothing and color filled in, it looks bad to me because so many animations look like that on NG, but idk im rambleing