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Fayte

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PostSubject: Fayte sucks with fullbody!   Fayte sucks with fullbody! I_icon_minitimeWed Aug 18, 2010 11:45 pm

These are REALLY old. Like...super oldish. I just got back home and i thought id dig these up. I think i know what i need to work on so..yea..idk
http://www.truploader.com/view/311523
http://www.truploader.com/view/474294
http://www.truploader.com/view/850779
thats it -_-
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PostSubject: Re: Fayte sucks with fullbody!   Fayte sucks with fullbody! I_icon_minitimeThu Aug 19, 2010 12:53 am

that's some afro. i keep seeing that guy around. i assume he's from some show i've never heard of.

in the first one it's a bit stiff. his hips don't turn much when he throws that punch / delivers that slap. it's almost like the viewer is in live theater where the actors face the audience's direction to make movements more clear and visible. animation ofc isn't live theater, but you get what i mean.

looks like you were employing the blur effect during the slap / punch, and some perspective, too. (btw, i can't really tell which it's supposed to be. if it's a punch, it'd be way more effective to bring the fist back before throwing it. the rest of his torso follows through that movement and we should see the hips twist as well, even if just a little. same principle for kicks.) if i'm correct, i think that bringing it back would be called anticipation. easing might help the believability of it, too. idk what to say about perspective, though.

it's kinda hard for me to tell what's going on in the second one, tbh. it's a li'l hard to follow. looks to me like the guy's excecuting a kick from the back after spinning around.
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PostSubject: Re: Fayte sucks with fullbody!   Fayte sucks with fullbody! I_icon_minitimeThu Aug 19, 2010 2:51 am

I see you're rocking the skeleton shapes! Very good.

And if repetition is the mother of skill, then the more you design skeleton bodies, the more efficient and easy they are, right?
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PostSubject: Re: Fayte sucks with fullbody!   Fayte sucks with fullbody! I_icon_minitimeThu Aug 19, 2010 4:17 pm

Hahaha, mine were alot worse .:D dont worry you'll get good with edyrem and hitorio
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PostSubject: Re: Fayte sucks with fullbody!   Fayte sucks with fullbody! I_icon_minitimeThu Aug 19, 2010 4:50 pm

Super old, eh? I'm liking what I could possibly see in the future, then. :)

When I say future, I mean vague image of your future self that has aquired scars and strength, but has also conquered many opponents. I mean an elite. That can only be obtained through spirit, though. Keep going.
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