Black'n'white Fist Painting

I'm using Paint Tool Sai.

I still barely know how to use it...
Regardless, I definitely need to paint more often. My skills are deteriorating!

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Hahaha fist painting. Is that like the manlier version of finger painting?

I sorta like it.
you really need to define those shapes more, currently it looks like one big blob of color.
there aren't really any edges/ folds defined.
if you'd change that, it would look so much better.
shading however on the knuckles, <3

lol mal...

Thanks for your input tom. That's something that I'll hone overtime.

But there are no edges in real life

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But there are no edges in real life

Pfft, yes there are, I see brush outlines on my body right now... cocaine is a helluva drug

It's really good, but you should try using values that aren't so dark. Seems like if things were lighter it might look a little better.
IM STARTING TO SEE THE OUTLINES TOO.

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It's really good, but you should try using values that aren't so dark. Seems like if things were lighter it might look a little better.
IM STARTING TO SEE THE OUTLINES TOO.