Subject: My Series Thread Wed Jan 05, 2011 8:54 pm
Name Unannounced
Characters-
Set (Protagonist)
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Traits: Uses a chain weapon, Has blackish-gray shaggy and dirty hair, Green eyes and tan skin-tone (will not look dirty and shaggy until he is living on his own for a wile)
Heres the most recent colored image of him.
(his original name was Zetsu)
Clothing: In the beginning he will have some sort of tribal clothing but will later upgrade to animal cloth. Abilities: good with chain weapon (after he is living on his own for a wile) Personality: Shy, ockward, funny at times and smooth a bit in a sloppy manner. when he thinks or is talking about his sister he becomes serious Purpose: to be a fun character to watch Goals: To find his sister Background: In episode 1 his sister is taken (more still to be added later.)
Sai
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Traits: She has black gray/brown hair and green eyes
Clothing: Island clothing Abilities: none Personality: Set's big sister who always tells him what to do, they are usually argueing Purpose: To be the drive Set Goals: To stay alive Background: Set's sister who gets captured
Extra: I designed this character after Grace, someone who animate pivot and I tried teaching it to.
1 armed man (I need to think of a name)
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Traits: Black spiky hair going backwards a robotic arm Clothing: Abilities: Has Zetsus chain weapon in episode 1 and a robotic arm later on Personality: Dosnt talk much, but he wants revenge if something happens to him, he dosnt show any other emotions Purpose: Goals: To capture as many people as possible for experiments (i want to make this something els but for now its this) Background:
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Edyrem
Posts : 2822 Joined : 2010-02-16
Subject: Re: My Series Thread Thu Jan 06, 2011 2:45 am
Oh boy Looks like both of us got rocket-boosted by that iscribble session
This is a pretty original concept, as far as I know (making the vague connection between the series for fans to speculate about). I can imagine you making an OVA after many years of the series that connects both main characters. The stuff that will make the fans jizz themselves the way that Naruto vs Sasuke OVA made me.
I think a good system to build a story on is by the whole mathematical principle that I'm about to demonstrate. As an animator who understands easing, it will make a lot of sense to you.
Think about a line that goes from point A to point B. Simple. |----------------------------------------| Now, to get past point A and get to point B, you'd have to cross the middle point, right? |-------------------|--------------------| And to get from there to point B, you'd have to get past the middle of that, right? |-------------------|----------|---------| And you'd have to reach the point between those, right? |-------------------|----------|----|----| And between those? |-------------------|----------|----|--|-| And those? |-------------------|----------|----|--|-||
Basically, this is the popular math concept of fitting an infinite amount within a limited barrier. It's possible because the things would get exactly small enough for each new one. It just jams an infinite amount of units into that little corner.
But let me digress a little and bring up the point; maybe it's a good technique to build the story from point A to B, and keep putting twists and obstacles in the middle and let the story unfold with that layout.
Now, I'm no story writer so I didn't try this and it's not some proved method... in fact, professional story writers surely have thought of this before, and they may or may not use it for whatever reason.
But to illustrate how this could work, look at this parody video of the lord of the rings.
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It gets you wondering.... Imagine starting the story that way, then just adding obstacles and problems, one by one, until the story becomes long enough to take up a whole fucking trilogy!
Now, there is a way this could be bad... it might be obvious that you're just pulling obstacles out of your ass if you don't do it with a little finesse, or it could be an interesting plot with engaging challenges, plot twists, and drama that keep the viewer attached.
Guest Guest
Subject: Re: My Series Thread Thu Jan 06, 2011 2:58 am
I'll kinda be doing that for my series Haha
ehh I wrote a whole example but I don't want to spoil that part haha but don't worry I picked up a story writing book called comickers should do the trick
Edyrem
Posts : 2822 Joined : 2010-02-16
Subject: Re: My Series Thread Thu Jan 06, 2011 7:23 am
hmm, I might look it up.
Does anyone else fantasize about doing a series like de8 is here?
Jettzin
Posts : 388 Joined : 2010-08-01
Subject: Re: My Series Thread Sat Jan 08, 2011 11:10 am
yeah i do edyrem have some ideas in mind but im more focusing on obtaining bettter drawing and animation skill before i do a series
Edyrem
Posts : 2822 Joined : 2010-02-16
Subject: Re: My Series Thread Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:40 pm
good stuff you must animate stuff like that RIGHT NOW.
They don't have to be official for your series, but you need to be familiar with the experience of animating it before you animate it. It's NOT a waste of time because of two big reasons:
1.) If you don't do this, you'll never make a series because you'll never think you're good enough.
2.) Animating is awesome.
Guest Guest
Subject: Re: My Series Thread Sun Jan 09, 2011 6:57 am
I dont think im good enugh yet either but it dosnt hurt to orgnize ideas before you start thats what im doing
Haitam
Posts : 262 Joined : 2010-02-18
Subject: Re: My Series Thread Sun Jan 09, 2011 7:17 am
Subject: Re: My Series Thread Sun Jan 09, 2011 6:08 pm
Word, Haitam... you have to just let your own inspiration flow so you can get a good story.
And like I said, De8, just animate that stuff so you know you can do it - you don't have to animate your own story.
Guest Guest
Subject: Re: My Series Thread Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:21 pm
Small update:)
Guest Guest
Subject: Re: My Series Thread Sun Jan 23, 2011 3:48 pm
Another small update :3 Sai has a new drawing under it and a new character (not defined yet) Also some outfit roughs for Sets animal fur roab thing and Island Set