TEST bullet dodge

http://filebox.me/view/t1jgz2365 its as wobbly as hell and the guide looks better than the fb... http://filebox.me/view/sywf8d2c4

thats good :c everyone that comes to this site gets better than me like straight away D': lol but it's a good anim o btw ill start the joint soon just coming up with ideas

there is a lot of resising which makes it wobbly ,the body keeps changing shapes. the animation is good though !

zuzu wrote:

its as wobbly as hell and the guide looks better than the fb...

This seems to be because your rough figure is not very efficient at its duty, which is to
Create a simple-enough looking figure to focus on the movements and keep easy propotion (Check)
Have a design that is shapely enough to be cleaned (Absent)

That figure's dimensions are not effeicient enough to be cleaned over properly, and it's most notable in the legs. This is more of the figure that's suited for cleaning:

Hitorio wrote:

zuzu wrote:

its as wobbly as hell and the guide looks better than the fb...

This seems to be because your rough figure is not very efficient at its duty, which is to
Create a simple-enough looking figure to focus on the movements and keep easy propotion (Check)
Have a design that is shapely enough to be cleaned (Absent)

That figure's dimensions are not effeicient enough to be cleaned over properly, and it's mot notable in the legs. This is more of the figure that's suited for cleaning:

Good checklist to keep in mind when doing a rough figure.

Although in my experience I don't even like doing just an outline of a character if i'm planning on detailing it.
I always feel like I need to add a little something here and there to keep track of important details.

Yeah...of course, the figure may vary, but that's the most basic of them.

Indeed.

well gents thanks for the advice :3 ill surely try to do it like that... especialy cuz ill get a tablet sonn and then itll be much easier

glad for you that you're getting a tablet.

To be honest, the fact that you did this much animation with a mouse already says a lot about your character, and I think you really deserve to have one, since you are showing a lot of commitment so far, even though at first you didn't seem to expect that you need to work hard.

I hope you maintain this determined attitude for many more years.

yea right now im really tented to come back to sticks but fuck that >:C ill go FB!!! anyways i might only get a pencil that works on any surface... anyways it's still a tablet and a ossum one O_O anyway cant wait to get it, ill do those guys hitorio showed me :3