Samurai Champloo Fan animation

UNFINISHED Story boards





The skeleton will be very skinny and rectangular because that's what I thought their skeleton would look like after watching episode 1



Part 1 [Skeleton]
http://www.truploader.com/view/795516&lb=n

Part 2 [Outline]
http://www.truploader.com/view/751552

Part 3 [Tweaking]
http://www.truploader.com/view/565497


The finished version will be in photoshop, and hopefully it looks like the real anime

Hey, that is not bad
I think you've got something here

Is the character going to do anything else? Just wondering.
I like the end result of that rough animation, though.

However, you seem to believe that just because those samurai have lean bodies that they've got loose looking bodies and brittle shape. OU CONTRARE! Give them proper body frames and real muscles, just keep them lean and athletic.

Umm but it's supposed to look like the anime Haha, there covered by baggy clothing and there arms are like toothpicks haha
Ill make an animation with good anatomy dont worry, but this isnt that animation


also he will do alot more theres a story board

Yeah even with the loose clothing you can still fit proper width shoulders in there.

Looking forward to the rest of the storyboard
Would you like to share it with us so that maybe we can help you improve it?

To critique your first drawing:

Your faces are flat, and don't really have depth yet. Slowly but surely, you're still getting better.

LOL thats a jole, look at the whole story board I put 4 mins tops into this, I'm takeing a few pictures of my sketch book now.

Oh my. A remake of Mugen vs Jin, with the exact same dialogue and everything (despite a few removed-lines)! You're making a point that says "This is MY version..how it should've happened".
I wonder how the phuck you are going to animate Mugen to live up to his potential. This schitt I'm interested in.

Edyrem, have you seen this phucking fight? ...or any of Samurai Champloo for that matter?

lol... Actually, Hitorio I DO remember the part where Mugen goes 'Better yet!' but none of the preceding or following dialogue. I'm just tryin'a be supportive x_x

De8struction wrote:

LOL thats a jole, look at the whole story board I put 4 mins tops into this, I'm takeing a few pictures of my sketch book now.

And yeah i really thought Mugen could have been animated better, and it was too short

Edy-rem:

I posted some of my sketch book

hehe, the animated character has octopus arms.

I recommend using actual storyboards that are premade to organize your drawngs, it will be easier that way. also, can you show us some longer anims? really curious about what you're capable of with those characters!

mugen has really skinny arms and thats what they look like, also then loger anim you see will be the finished one, and my story boards ork fine for me

I really like the style !

(his left foot is sliding over the ground when he stands up,it looks as if he's putting all his weight on to his right foot.)

Yeah i wanted his left foot to slide over i didnt intend to make it look like his weight is on his right foot, it honestly never crossed my mind

nice

nice nice not much to see there but keep at it and please make it good cause i love samurai champloo soo much and tbh it would actually hurt my feelings if you rushed this and didn't make the style correct or rushed frames ;-; but good luck :3 look forward to see it finished

Flax be keepin' it real up in hurr... don't goof up, de8. We want art bacon!

yeah maybe :PI want to practice more before i continue

OOOOOOOOH nononoonononono.... let's not get into that mindset or you'll never get it done.